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Created: 11/25 2008
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Category: Respect

My Poems

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Stephanie Atkins, and Nicky Kindred
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Wihtout my baby brother
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Why did it have to happen?
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What could I have done to help you?
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Why does death hurt so bad?
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Lost Hope
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Failure, nothing left
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Empty Heart, Emptier Soul
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Why?
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So many times
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She was only 13
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Not Really Living
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How it hurts
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Lifes like a Suicide
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Suicide Song

Get It Right

Drown out the music
drown out the tears
don't lose yourself to the fears
let freedom reign
let yourself laugh
just be happy that your still here
live for the moment
but don't get caught up in it
love with your soul
let the people know
that if your going to scream
or if your going to cry
its not because life isn't treating you right
tears of happiness
are the only thing to track down my face
so be happy with what you've got
but always strive for more
because your worth it
no matter what anyone says
second chances are a miracle in disguise
all you have to do is get it right this time
because the moment is yours
its what you make of it
so just enjoy your life
when it gets rough
just keep smiling and trying
because you can get it right
all you have to do it reallt try

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On November 25th 2008 assumetheworst Said: 
assumetheworst oh breena its got to behonest...you kinda ryhyme weird and such but anyway you shoulda made it flow it had lots of emotion but it seems as if you repeated yourself with dif words....i loved it and it seems you have alot on your mind and yuour make it seem that way.... it vas good yo
On November 25th 2008 firerocket67 Said: 
firerocket67 plz leave a detailed comment