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I'm Everything You Hate

Views (65) Passion Created on 2-12-08 Flag
Judge me and I'll prove you wrong
try and break me, I'll hold strong
hate me and I'll laugh, you just wait and see
wish me dead, thats ok, your opinion can't faze
lie to me and I'll find out, easy to let things out in a spout
screw me over and watch me laugh
you can't break me, you can't effect me
so stop hatin on me, you don't know a thing about me
I try to be nice, and you return the favor in cruelty
I'll take my revenge in my own time
when you least expect it, your mine 
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On February 13th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth I don't want to get on your bad side. haha I can just see you planning and plotting your surprise attack. :) Nice work!
On February 12th 2008 joabizz Said :
joabizz I don't know, I disagree with assume, after reading a lot of your work, I feel I know where you are coming from, so how could you have made this *stronger*?? this is what you are feeling so you own it... great job..
On February 12th 2008 assumetheworst Said :
assumetheworst you shouldve made it more emotional and stronger by getting faze a rhyme, and laugh as well, you made it blend togtether but what cpoouldve been kooer would be to make them rhyme with something so unexpected...but other wise its pretty koo ^-^
On February 12th 2008 firerocket67 Said :
firerocket67 plz leave comments!