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Stephanie Atkins, and Nicky Kindred |
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Wihtout my baby brother |
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Why did it have to happen? |
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9
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What could I have done to help you? |
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Why does death hurt so bad? |
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9
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Lost Hope |
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11
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Failure, nothing left |
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17
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Empty Heart, Emptier Soul |
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13
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Why? |
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9
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So many times |
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She was only 13 |
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10
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Not Really Living |
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How it hurts |
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Lifes like a Suicide |
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Suicide Song |
My Cries
*Chorus*
nobody hears my cries
I'm constantly crying out for help
nobody ever seems to listen
whats it ever matter
someday I'll just lay down and dies
*Verse 1*
I'm crying out
to Heaven and people alike
everyone turns a blind eye
its nothing but my pain and I
ever-surounded
forever bounded
yet no one hears
anything that has to do with me
*Chorus*
nobody hears my cries
I'm constantly crying out for help
nobody ever seems to listen
whats it ever matter
someday I'll just lay down and dies
*Verse 2*
I fall to my knees
shield myself from my worries
I cry out for the help I'm seeking
nobody can even hear me
so wrapped-up
busy with their lives
why can't they hear my cries
so desperate for help
I rise up off my knees
I'll no longer be pleading
*Chorus*
nobody hears my cries
I'm constantly crying out for help
nobody ever seems to listen
whats it ever matter
someday I'll just lay down and dies
*Verse 3*
I'm sick of their lies
nobody hears my cries
back to the outside
no more pleading
no more crying
*Chorus*
nobody hears my cries
I'm constantly crying out for help
nobody ever seems to listen
whats it ever matter
someday I'll just lay down and dies
| On February 22nd 2008 cuteness66 Said : | |
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its different it seems like it needs a hook... or a different rhythem |
| On January 29th 2008 assumetheworst Said : | |
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this is koo, very emotional and such ^-^ nice job :) |
| On January 25th 2008 firerocket67 Said : | |
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plz comment if you rate |


