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Created:
06/20 2007
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218
Category:
Lyric
My Poems
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ummm? |
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because |
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beneath the portrait of our soul |
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Can u feel it? |
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lets get high |
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I'll get my revenge someday |
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can't be real |
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Get the fuck away |
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Help Me |
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never |
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Let her Lie |
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Heart full of hate |
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No one knows |
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my tears, my heart, my pain, my misery |
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untitled |
I already know
Your demise is my demise
I see the fear behind your eyes
I can taste the freedom you wish you had
hear your cursed whispers when your mad
I'm the one standing behind you when you think no ones there
but you should know that i will always be here
trying to take away your misery
you deserve better than this, better than me
I know this is not what you wanted and that I'm all wrong
but I will stay beside you till the next person comes along
Please Login to post comments| On July 10th 2007 Rottenxjuggla Said: |
| Love it. Your realy good! |
| On June 21st 2007 blah2blah Said: |
| I like it-dont change anything!!! "you deserve better then this, better then me" reminded of the song"better then me"-by hinder...good song...and good poem!!!! =] |
| On June 20th 2007 vamplover1 Said: |
| this is good do not change a thing! it is perfict! |
| On June 20th 2007 tswieberg Said: |
| I have to agree with crotchrotwedgy....this is awesome. |
| On June 20th 2007 crotchrotwedgy Said: |
| no this is good, it was what you were feeling, and that's what makes good poetry |
| On June 20th 2007 fgggfx Said: |
| i like the beginning but i might redo the ending |
