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ummm? |
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because |
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beneath the portrait of our soul |
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Can u feel it? |
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lets get high |
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I'll get my revenge someday |
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can't be real |
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Get the fuck away |
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Help Me |
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Let her Lie |
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Heart full of hate |
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No one knows |
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my tears, my heart, my pain, my misery |
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Let her Lie
Wishing she would die with every day that goes on
Her body still here but her soul already gone
She drinks the liquor
Taking each shot a little bit quicker
Smoking to get to that unrealistic place
All the pain showing in her face
Having sex with guys she'd never dare to
Doing things she never thought she'd do
This is the last straw, she can't take this anymore
She's running out the door
getting in her car
Driving fast, driving far
Going through every red light
She wants to die tonight
She imagines everyone being sad
Having lost the person they never had
On the interstate and in the rain
The car is skidding, and she feels a surge of pain
She is hitting the brakes
Giving all it takes.....
She wakes to bright lights and people surrounding her
it all seems like a blur
She can barely move and her head is beginning to ache
no words come out as she tries to say it was a mistake
She doesn't want to die
tears fill her eyes as she's about to cry
Her parents looking as if they can't take it
the doctor walks in and says "she's not gonna make it"
| On June 23rd 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said: |
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| wow this is amazing. |
| On June 21st 2007 Tigga16 Said: |
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| You are extremely talented! This is an amazing poem.. |
| On June 1st 2007 Purp7eFi7th Said: |
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| anothe amazing poem... |
| On May 29th 2007 brokenwing3 Said: |
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| it hits you in the gut. I am sure that everyone has had a moment in their life they have wished to die. They should read this poem. Very well written! |
| On May 24th 2007 tswieberg Said: |
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| Wow, this is an awesome poem.....really sad. |
| On May 24th 2007 fgggfx Said: |
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| let me know what u think |


