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05/10 2007
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My Poems
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ummm? |
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because |
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beneath the portrait of our soul |
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Can u feel it? |
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lets get high |
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I'll get my revenge someday |
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can't be real |
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Get the fuck away |
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Help Me |
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never |
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Let her Lie |
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Heart full of hate |
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No one knows |
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my tears, my heart, my pain, my misery |
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Help Me
MURDER me as I wake
STRIKE my heart with your bloody stake
SLASH my wrists and LET me bleed
give me the little PUSH that I need
as I get closer to the edge, about to DROP
so high up, wind in my hair, ears starting to pop
FALLING to the ground and, beginning to spin
I already know I CANNOT win
Please Login to post comments| On June 26th 2007 InTheMist Said: |
| I love this.....has a desperation to it you just can't ignore.... |
| On June 22nd 2007 AlexINTJ Said: |
| The imagery with this is stunning--and really dark. Yuu can really portray emotion well. Really sad and foreboding. Excellent poem! |
| On May 20th 2007 tswieberg Said: |
| Wow, this is an awesome poem. |
| On May 14th 2007 ilyCourtneyily Said: |
| i love it! that is really awesome! |
| On May 11th 2007 BrokenWiingz Said: |
| i like it,its like its telling u how u start ur day but in a tragic ending |
