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song lyrics i wrote for my concept album

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Building the Machine

Views (108) Lyric Created on 7-9-07 Flag

Now you’ll all realize I was sane all along

Ranting and raving, but I’ll prove you wrong

The time to erase a moment in life

The life to erase at the point of a knife

 

Come one and come all, see my guts on display

 All painstakingly harvested, but hey

That’s what it takes to change the world

And fix all the reasons I fell for that girl

 

A shock to the body will shock your mind too

It makes you do things that you thought would not do

And a shock to the earth will do much the same

Will save all the humans from your little game

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On September 8th 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I really like the way you put this one together. It sounds really great.
On July 9th 2007 Jeff1315 Said :
Jeff1315 Wow, GREAT poem :)
On July 9th 2007 101091 Said :
101091 Wow... I love it. That's deeply put. Sad but very well written.