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about my recent breakup

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Realizations Come in Waves

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When I realized that I wasn’t special

I realized that I would be ok.

 

When I realized that I would be ok

I realized that there was some good too.

 

When I realized that there was some good too

I realized that you shared it with me.

 

When I realized that you shared it with me

I realized that we shared the pain.

 

When I realized we shared the pain

I realized that I wanted to help.

 

When I realized that I wanted to help

I realized that you wouldn’t let me.

 

When I realized that you wouldn’t let me

I realized that I wasn’t special.

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On July 10th 2007 guitaristcse Said :
guitaristcse thats very nice, I can apprecaite the feeling of trying to help and being pushed away. great job :)
On July 9th 2007 Xpoetxgurlx Said :
Xpoetxgurlx i love it!! very good job muffin!!
On July 9th 2007 iheartmyrp Said :
iheartmyrp Thats really good! I love poems where the last line reverts back to the beginning... it gives the poem a sense of closure. It is verrrry well written! =)
On July 9th 2007 angelofwar4 Said :
angelofwar4 Interesting, but I think you are special - only a special person could write something as sweet as this! Good job, John. :-)
On July 9th 2007 Jeff1315 Said :
Jeff1315 Wow. GREAT poem. wow...
On July 8th 2007 101091 Said :
101091 WOW... I really like it. I especially like the first and last two lines. Great job.