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easter bunny
One of the least plausible stories
That children are ever told;
And yet they readily believe it
Before they grow too old.
What is it about this fantasy
That makes it seem untrue?
A giant rabbit, laden
With eggs, and candy, too.
The adult mind might wonder,
With all its years of advance,
How any child with half a brain
Could give a sound defense
That a simple woodland creature
Could travel to your home,
And come and go, while leaving
A treat for each one’s own.
While a child cannot make a logical argument for the above,
I with the mind of a man,
And heart of a boy,
Shall undertake to explain the concept that has been missed
entirely
It is not the children who are mistaken;
It is the very adults who endeavor to deceive them.
For every year the Easter spirit enters every one of them
And compels them perpetuate the fancy of their children
For another year, at least.
So you see, it is them who have us fooled.
| On July 16th 2007 emoxMCRx4ever Said : | |
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Hee hee hee...........Easter bunny.....I love it |
| On July 9th 2007 iheartmyrp Said : | |
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You're right. It makes a lot more sense now. I think it might just be subtle enough that i overlooked it. But now that you mention it, it definitely makes the poem a lot more sophisticated than most! Good job. |
| On July 9th 2007 iheartmyrp Said : | |
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I love the beginning... but towards the end, you sort of lose the whole rhyme scheme. Other than that, I've not seen too many poems of this quality! You did a great job with it! |
| On July 9th 2007 angelofwar4 Said : | |
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I meant to say 'respectful', but I'm tired - please forgive the spelling error. :-) |
| On July 9th 2007 angelofwar4 Said : | |
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WOW, Cool! I like it, very good. I'll call you John, 'muffin' just isn't rescectful enough for a person of your high intellect. Good job. :-) |
| On July 8th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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I love it. I wasn't sure I would when I saw the title so I read your other one first and then I was like well why not... I'm glad I did though 'cause I like this one even better. Great job! Let me know if you post some more. |
| On July 8th 2007 Jeff1315 Said : | |
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Very great poem!!! =) and by the way, if you keep writing... a lot... it takes a lot of poems to get to the point where you can just write outta your heart and mind... I dunno though, some people it comes naturally, just keep writing you WILL get better!! :D But once again, awesome poem, and thanks for the comment |
| On July 8th 2007 Xpoetxgurlx Said : | |
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i love it!!!!
i really do! ^-^
love ya muffin!! XD |


