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Views (68) Love Created on 12-21-07 Flag

how is it that someone

like you can make me

feel the way you do

i try to hide my feelings for you

but it never works out

but sometime i hope

that maybe we can

give it another try

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On December 30th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 nice! short but sweet..it was a TAD rushed..but i still like it
On December 30th 2007 MoOnZoMbIe Said :
MoOnZoMbIe this is how i feel. how i want him to feel. how i imagine he feels. that's why i'm loving your stuff.
On December 22nd 2007 vernathome Said :
vernathome seemed rush, not your best work. sorry just my opinion. keep trying