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evildarkness13

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About my gf problems

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Whispers in the Wind

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Pain

Created on 4-18-08

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I listen to the whispers in the wind
As I long for your love
Visualizing your hand on mine
Your trust is what I dream of

Loneliness in this gloomy breeze
Chills my ever bone
I've done nothing wrong, but beg for your trust
Trying to kill htat one bird with this one stone

Desire you to believe in this love
Why do you let your fears so closely creep
How could I be with another women
When i was alone in my room, crying myself to sleep

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On May 5th 2008 mydragonlord Said :

	This was good, just a typo or two, has the feeling that there should be more to the poem. but still good never the less!

On April 24th 2008 poeticspud Said :

	feels unfinished, i can relate to that AND the feeling in it, despair... thats what i think, and its hard to put closure on despair... if u had closure you wouldnt be 'desparate' so to speak right? eh.. i can be confusing so if my comments dont make sense just tell urself its a good thing haha

On April 23rd 2008 xmradio2007 Said :

	love this one tooo

On April 21st 2008 MeVelvetRose17 Said :

	i can't read this and not cry every time. i can't read this and think "I fucked up." but i still love it even if i know who its about..

On April 19th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said :

	I love it

On April 18th 2008 kjoy428 Said :

	wow....this is soo amazing..its soo full of emotion the end just blew me away...i was not expecting it..but it fit so well...i'm speechless...its soo sad...

On April 18th 2008 DeathMetalPunk Said :

	good!

On April 18th 2008 morbidangel585 Said :

	aww, i loved this one

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