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Created on 4-9-08
The moon lit sky shrouded by mist
Running through the brush thin and thick
Crying out, trying to run
As evil tries to put out the sun
Rambling on about the pain
As the dark peirces my veins
Running hard, Running fast
Trying to get out of here at last
Sweat beading down my face
Feeling the beat of my heart continue to race
As my eyelids shut
My legs trip up
I see my body fall to the frozen ground
As i listen to the numbing sound
Realizing that is it
I just need to get a grip
Running at all costs
I run till I am no longer lost
Please Login to post comments| On May 15th 2008 Babydotz Said : | |
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Lol wow I like this. A lot! It is kinda on the random side but could mean many things Good work |
| On April 17th 2008 jwoody1980 Said : | |
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good |
| On April 14th 2008 dark013angel Said : | |
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Wonderful. Great flow and word choice...like everything else of yours I've read. Great job! =) |
| On April 13th 2008 California1516 Said : | |
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this is very very well written!! i love how there is no puncuation anywhere, because it works well that there is none..it makes it more intense, because you end up reading it faster!! great work:) |
| On April 13th 2008 xmradio2007 Said : | |
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love it like all your other work |
| On April 9th 2008 CharTheKnight Said : | |
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i've never seen a format like this...but i think it could work...love the words and how they go together. |
| On April 9th 2008 evildarkness13 Said : | |
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i don't know what was running through my mind, it kinda came up with it like most my other works |
| On April 9th 2008 MeVelvetRose17 Said : | |
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awww. i like it. a lot wut was running through your mind when you rote this. it kicks ass babe! |
| On April 9th 2008 evildarkness13 Said : | |
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the format is kinda screwed up, it was my temporary pc |
