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Created on 4-3-08
Waking up next to you
Greatest feeling I could ever feel
Seeing the look in your eyes
Seeing the little tear you cry
As I sing this little love song
Knowing that I would die just for you
Just to prove the love I have
Hoping this feeling will last forever
Kissing your pearl lips
As I wipe away that one tear
Seeing your smile
As I wipe away your fears
Please Login to post comments| On April 16th 2008 amptone Said : | |
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Very well written and it's obviously emotional and seems true. It has a great feel and a bit of warmth and bitterness to it, well done. |
| On April 13th 2008 xmradio2007 Said : | |
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aww so sweet who ever she is she is lucky =) |
| On April 9th 2008 MeVelvetRose17 Said : | |
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hey that's about me...you no babe i still have it in my pocket!!! |
| On April 8th 2008 dark013angel Said : | |
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Beautiful. Short, simple, but packing so much meaning and emotion, it's damn near overwhelming. Great job on this. |
| On April 5th 2008 KaosQueen Said : | |
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this is sweet (: |
| On April 5th 2008 Koraney Said : | |
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dis is such a sweet poem dis gurl is very lucky indeed |
| On April 5th 2008 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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aww, lucky girl that this goes to |
