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Paradise rises in your eyes
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Created on 1-16-08
everytime i look into your eyes
i see the rush on by
lost in the presence of you
just knowing this feeling is true
can't stand not being by your side
crying not knowing why
as you whisp into my arms
our hearts cemented by love
i see how wrong i once was
now the day unwinds
and i choke on this cold air
then you say those three words
you showed me you still care
paradise arises from behind
living in happiness i find
seeing your body beside mine as i dream
happy we are, through and through
my happy ending has finally come true
Please Login to post comments| On April 22nd 2008 MeVelvetRose17 Said : | |
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aww...i like it!! i like this a lot!lol! |
| On February 3rd 2008 xmradio2007 Said : | |
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just wanting a happy ending like you so i love this poem |
| On February 1st 2008 edgarpoeincarn Said : | |
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yay a happy love ending we all need one once in a while huh? |
| On January 24th 2008 jetkills Said : | |
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goshness i love it i love all your poems your so talented ^_^ |
| On January 21st 2008 Gigglez200969 Said : | |
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Wow this is really good i wish i still had this great job i love it! |
| On January 16th 2008 comacozi101 Said : | |
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so happy and dreamy. A different reflection towards life. Simply said: Love it. |
