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Love Song
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Created on 1-4-08
as everyone else just sits and chats
no one notices what i am staring at
the blank screen takes over my mind
traces of you i am struggling to find
time flys for everyone else
only as it races itself
life being takin in a slow motion
my heart can't ache off this love potion
just seeming to love her more
knowing for sure my heart will become sore
maybe once my trance is wrong
maybe doves will sing this love song
only because my mind is free
our love will last eternity
no one notices what i am staring at
the blank screen takes over my mind
traces of you i am struggling to find
time flys for everyone else
only as it races itself
life being takin in a slow motion
my heart can't ache off this love potion
just seeming to love her more
knowing for sure my heart will become sore
maybe once my trance is wrong
maybe doves will sing this love song
only because my mind is free
our love will last eternity
Please Login to post comments| On April 23rd 2008 Snooky9e Said : | |
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really good...love can be painful, but its totally worth it... |
| On April 9th 2008 MeVelvetRose17 Said : | |
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i read that one too. you were in study hall and again i still have it!!!!! |
| On January 9th 2008 xmradio2007 Said : | |
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to good for my words |
| On January 7th 2008 goodgurl8504 Said : | |
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Love is scary, but oh so worth it, no matter how it ends or doesn't... But nice job |
| On January 6th 2008 California1516 Said : | |
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aww how sweet..very nice:) |
| On January 5th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Nice rhythm. Awesome work! |
