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Created on 1-4-08
as the black clouds roll in
you lay on my mind
maybe this was meant to be
maybe this is our time
i've done so much to be with you
and all seem to do is cause more pain
as least that was before
now its me, now i'm doing much more
i can't believe you took me back
even though i've destroyed your heart
but i can change the pain i caused
i will wash away the dark
Just to brighten up your day
all i want to say
I Love You
Please Login to post comments| On January 9th 2008 xmradio2007 Said : | |
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loving it |
| On January 7th 2008 goodgurl8504 Said : | |
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It's nice even though it's short... Short and sweet... |
| On January 6th 2008 California1516 Said : | |
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awwwwwww very nice:) |
| On January 4th 2008 dark013angel Said : | |
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i like how it's dark, yet has a sense of hope in it..good job |
