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Worlds Of Evil
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Created on 12-1-07
confusion takes over my destroyed body
i begin to wonder what i have done wrong
destroyed hearts begin to become greedy
as i sing that sad and lonely song
the remedy sinks into my poor soul
thinking of why this has become
maybe this evil shall become my goal
too many people this torture of me is just fun
demons surround me
as this ugly world just reeks of evilness
the light slowly fades away
as my heart sinks into the abyss
so i sit here with my lonely thoughts to myself
and the pistol beside me looks friendly
the trigger is pulled and i take a yelp
for my death is slow and steady
i begin to wonder what i have done wrong
destroyed hearts begin to become greedy
as i sing that sad and lonely song
the remedy sinks into my poor soul
thinking of why this has become
maybe this evil shall become my goal
too many people this torture of me is just fun
demons surround me
as this ugly world just reeks of evilness
the light slowly fades away
as my heart sinks into the abyss
so i sit here with my lonely thoughts to myself
and the pistol beside me looks friendly
the trigger is pulled and i take a yelp
for my death is slow and steady
Please Login to post comments| On December 5th 2007 XxEMOxBITCHxX Said : | |
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great! you are super awsome! |
| On December 3rd 2007 xmradio2007 Said : | |
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woah AWESOME
in love with this one 2
i just can't get enough of ur poems
they are just so real with feelings
and lets people connect
and yea i have new poems i just have put them up yet |
| On December 1st 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Love it! |
