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Left Broken
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Created on 12-1-07
you left me broken
you left me beaten to the ground
you wonder why
i sing my songs to this sound
the pain you caused me
makes me cry ever more
you just can't get enough of this
the sight of my dying is for sure
blackness surrounds the world
as everyone knows
what you have done to me
the deep hatred finely grows
you left me broken
you left me beaten to the ground
you wonder why
i sing my songs to this sound
you left me beaten to the ground
you wonder why
i sing my songs to this sound
the pain you caused me
makes me cry ever more
you just can't get enough of this
the sight of my dying is for sure
blackness surrounds the world
as everyone knows
what you have done to me
the deep hatred finely grows
you left me broken
you left me beaten to the ground
you wonder why
i sing my songs to this sound
Please Login to post comments| On January 23rd 2008 Daemion Said : | |
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ya see... it's good, and actually this one has a pretty solid idea... my suggestion is a little more imagery, |
| On December 5th 2007 XxEMOxBITCHxX Said : | |
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good good i think i love you lol =) |
| On December 3rd 2007 xmradio2007 Said : | |
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hey this is really good
i am in love with it =D |
