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Trying To Help
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Created on 11-25-07
they don't realize it
wut they are doing is ruining their lives
i just wish they could see
wut it has done to me
maybe then they would stop
but listening seems to be their problem
they dont' know how to do it
so im gonna stop trying to help
they just dont' give a shit
it doesn't matter how much i care
they jus gonna smoke up
so why do i even dare
i can't do this on my own
i need help trying to get them to see
if someone would be by my side
i could help them to be
the best they can be
wut they are doing is ruining their lives
i just wish they could see
wut it has done to me
maybe then they would stop
but listening seems to be their problem
they dont' know how to do it
so im gonna stop trying to help
they just dont' give a shit
it doesn't matter how much i care
they jus gonna smoke up
so why do i even dare
i can't do this on my own
i need help trying to get them to see
if someone would be by my side
i could help them to be
the best they can be
Please Login to post comments| On November 25th 2007 xmradio2007 Said : | |
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Nice!!! i like no i love it!! :) You always do a good job and i think u will help them see it and then you will also will always do a good deed |
| On November 25th 2007 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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this is a nice poem... i hope you are able to help them see what theyre doing to themselves and others |
| On November 25th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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oh i like it!! :D nice job:) |
| On November 25th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said : | |
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this is really good. i like it and thanx for the comments |
