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Created on 11-18-07
nothing is ok in this empty life of mine, all that comes of it is pain and misery, sorry if speaking in riddles is all i seem to be doing, but i cannont help it, lost is my heart and soul, and no one will ever know, happy is the fake face i put on, but on my inside, i want nothing more then to die, this is the only feeling that takes over my body, no matter who gets in my way, nobody, if this makes any sense, it fortells my future, my quest, my goal, now i am to put it to the test,
Please Login to post comments| On November 25th 2007 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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aw this is a sad poem its pretty strong too i like it |
| On November 25th 2007 ALIESAM21 Said : | |
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please don't kill urself, life wont suk 4ever, i promise, if you need to talk? |
| On November 19th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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aww so sadddd..i like the line "happy is the fake face i put on" brilliant !!:) |
