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Not a Curse
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Created on 11-14-07
leaves blowing in the wind
as we are walking through the park
sitting by a pond
we hold each other as it gets dark
we sit there all night
staring at the sky
talking about life
and waiting for the sun to rise
i kiss you on the lips
and you start to cry
i ask you if its because of happiness
you said thats exactly why
i get down on my knee
and say those four magic words
you finally say yes after i tell you
this is love, not a curse
as we are walking through the park
sitting by a pond
we hold each other as it gets dark
we sit there all night
staring at the sky
talking about life
and waiting for the sun to rise
i kiss you on the lips
and you start to cry
i ask you if its because of happiness
you said thats exactly why
i get down on my knee
and say those four magic words
you finally say yes after i tell you
this is love, not a curse
Please Login to post comments| On November 25th 2007 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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aww i like this |
| On November 17th 2007 comacozi101 Said : | |
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I luv it... especially the last 2 stanzas they seem to make the poem more powerful... |
| On November 17th 2007 comacozi101 Said : | |
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I luv it... especially the last 2 stanzas they seem to make the poem more powerful... |
| On November 14th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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It had a bittersweet feeling to it [to me, at least]...Great work, I love your word choice! I really liked to first two stanzas! |
| On November 14th 2007 xmradio2007 Said : | |
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AWW thats a great poem
that so sad and happy all at the same time |
