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Views (139) Other Created on 6-21-07 Flag

Then you turn around and see nothing

you only feel a breeze on your cheek

you see me, but you don't see myself

you really don't know the real me

 

I saw you give me that look

I thought it was a sign

and then you talk about those girls

to make the green monster grow inside

 

The love is invisible only to you

I feel it all the time

tearing a deep hole in my chest

taking the soul that is mine

 

Then why do you kiss my cheek

caress and play with my hair

why do you hug me so tight

why do you even care

 

Then you turn around and see nothing

you only feel a breeze on your cheek

you see me, but you don't see myself

you really don't know the real me

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On August 1st 2007 twilightx28 Said :
twilightx28 I like this. Yay!! I commented you! Mia likes it too and I'm sure she will comment and rate...right Mia?? haha. "Yes Sam" she answers. Lol. Don't ask...really bored...getting loopy...
On July 29th 2007 edwardlover92 Said :
edwardlover92 aww no one commented me. Good I actually really hate this poem because I don't feel this way any more. oh well