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Views (159) Pain Created on 6-21-07 Flag

I'm falling into the darkness

that is my mind.

To search for a peace

I can not find.

Feeling the pain of your

heartbreaking kiss.

Seeing that's something

that I'm going to miss.

Trying to forget all my

feelings for you.

Seeing my hopeless dreams will

never come true.

Knowing my heart can't make

it through this.

Do you really have to keep

that undying promise.

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On June 21st 2007 twilightx28 Said :
twilightx28 I love this poem...I liked it when u showed it to me...its good.
On June 21st 2007 kantokah Said :
kantokah i love ur wording and flow. every powerful.
On June 21st 2007 twilight023 Said :
twilight023 it has a nice flow, and it draws you in