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ehh not my best at all

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Within a dream

Views (105) Love Created on 11-8-07 Flag

This is a dream

It can't be real

What are these emotions?

These things I feel

 

I look all around

It all seems the same

Waiting for reality

But reality never came

 

Too good to be true

I should've woken by now

But he's standing in front of me

And I still don't know how

 

His face close to mine

My heart skips a beat

I'm shaking inside

Our lips finally meet

 

I must be in bed

I have to be sleeping

But his touch feels so real

And my heart still is leaping

 

No, I'm wide awake

It was all meant to be

But if I am asleep

Please don't wake me from this dream

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On November 9th 2007 twilight023 Said :
twilight023 wow i love this, like what sam said "speechless"
On November 9th 2007 twilightx28 Said :
twilightx28 **speechless**
On November 8th 2007 heaven1blessed Said :
heaven1blessed aww i can relate this is how i feel bout ma boo bein n az n im n ny, beautiful
On November 8th 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic Love it! Especially the first verse!
On November 8th 2007 spazzattacks76 Said :
spazzattacks76 DANG IT! It won't let me click the rate button more than once.. I was going to it a million times :D
On November 8th 2007 spazzattacks76 Said :
spazzattacks76 I AM SO IN LOVE WITH THIS! GAH! I ALWAYS FEEL LIKE THIS! Wow, so in love it isn't even funny. :D:D:D:D:D::D:D:D:D::D:D:D::D:D:D:D:D::D
On November 8th 2007 jessimerri369 Said :
jessimerri369 this is amazing really