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The one?
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Created on 11-6-07
He looks so good
And is very charming
The way my heart leaps
Is quite alarming
I can't stop my blushing
The butterflies are flying
Why does he look at me?
And why can't I stop smiling?
He wants to talk
But I can't find my voice
According to my mother
He's the right choice
Time to go
One last wistful glance
I just wish I could speak
But I missed my chance
No sleep tonight
His face is all I see
Could he be the one?
The right guy for me?
Please Login to post comments| On November 9th 2007 twilightx28 Said : | |
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I love this. Ya know, you are quite a discouraging poet in this here website...but EVERYONE loves you anyway |
| On November 7th 2007 TheBranster Said : | |
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lol, im always lost for words with someone i like, which is why im gonna be a looser posting shitty jokes on here til the day i die, lmao. great poem |
| On November 7th 2007 Halfpint9135 Said : | |
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aw, that's sweet |
| On November 7th 2007 amptone Said : | |
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I have felt this way for 1 year now with my pre-husband, 1 year today go us!!! Very nicely written it's light hearted and brighter, not as dark as some of the others, good stuff |
| On November 6th 2007 spazzattacks76 Said : | |
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:D LOVE IT! |
| On November 6th 2007 jennaferz Said : | |
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ha i like it =] way good. |
| On November 6th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Love it! |
| On November 6th 2007 fallenbloodxxx Said : | |
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there's no way to know, unless you ask. :) |
