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A mother worries about her little girlRate this Poem
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Dreamer
Sit still and smile
you sweet little child
Nothing can happen to you
You live in a dream
Where no pain can be seen
Nothing can happen to you
No guilt and regret
Things you'll always forget
Nothing can happen to you
but your dreams start to shatter
reality starts to matter
Anything can happen to you
Girls can be mean
You'll lose self-esteem
Anything can happen to you
Boy's can be cruel
You'll feel over ruled
Anything can happen to you
Your heart starts to break
You make big mistakes
Everything can happen to you
so, sit still and smile
You sweet little child
You can handle whatever happens to you
| On October 7th 2007 darkfairee14 Said : | |
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I agree with sam you seriously do have a talent.this would actually be good as a song if you think about it.KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!! |
| On September 22nd 2007 twilightx28 Said : | |
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And again, blown away. Marnie you have a SERIOUS talent here. I love it. |
| On September 21st 2007 DestinyHope324 Said : | |
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it was so wonderful it so great emoition if you like what i do go to my poem REGECTION |
| On September 21st 2007 twilight023 Said : | |
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OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG(REmember this) This is freaking great i REALLYYYY love it, no joke |
| On September 20th 2007 spazzattacks76 Said : | |
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LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! I STARTED SQUEALING! AHHHH! AMAZING! LOVE IT! MORE POEMS! :D |
| On September 20th 2007 SweetDeath26 Said : | |
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Awwwww.... *Claps* So wonderful! I absolutely love it! |
| On September 20th 2007 XtranquillityX Said : | |
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Very nicely written! If only they could remain innocent forever ~sighs~ |


