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Song to Mary
Mary, t’you forever I’ll stay
With you in my heart, with you in my skin
Please hear my cry for love
Please understand, I cannot go alone.
Mary, be kind to me, I am still a child
Waiting patiently for love, waiting for you
Please hear my cry of life
Please understand, I need s’meone to love me.
Mary, I am tired and sick
Of those daily beatings, of those daily haitings
Please hear my cry for death
Please understand, I can’t go on like this.
Mary, I have found someone
To love like mad, to cherish forever
Please hear my cry of freedom
Please understand, the one I love has gone today.
Mary, I’m coming to see you
I can’t wait, I have missed you so
Please hear my cry of joy
Please understand, it’ll be quick, do not stop me.| On June 14th 2007 dirtyd321 Said : | |
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I really enjoy reading your work |
| On June 13th 2007 ghostfire13 Said : | |
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dark, somber. i love it. |
| On June 13th 2007 monkeydee22 Said : | |
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This is very deep... Extremely good. I love it!
~Vampyr~ |
| On June 12th 2007 individulsong Said : | |
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you're a great poet. this one is so nice. it's so peaceful, but sad at the same time. i really like it. |
| On June 12th 2007 AlexINTJ Said : | |
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amazing--I mean really, that is just brilliant |
| On June 12th 2007 Pooh455 Said : | |
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ilove it |
| On June 12th 2007 leafyprincess Said : | |
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it's really sad, but sort of beautiful with it. i love it! xx |
| On June 12th 2007 angelalone Said : | |
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this is so sad, but it's really really well written. i like it. |
| On June 12th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said : | |
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wow that's amazing i love it |
| On June 12th 2007 Savedbyalamb Said : | |
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Sad, but I like it! |
| On June 12th 2007 rokmisox26 Said : | |
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i like this1... so sad |
| On June 12th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I like this one! It is so desperately sad~ |
| On June 12th 2007 earindle Said : | |
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Ummm, I inventend the word 'haitings', it normally has no plural! |


