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Views (1463) Tragedy Created on 6-11-07 Flag

You don’t know who I am

You wouldn’t even recognise my face

Though all the while my head’s way up in space

I dream that you were my and only man.

 

What if the world were made of witches,

Elves, dwarves, and dragons’ lairs?

Would you, would you be my friend?

Would you, would you even love me?

 

What if again it were the Middle-Ages,

With knights and monks living together?

Would you, would you be my friend?

Would you, would you even love me?

 

I dream both day and night

Of witches and castles bright

My eyes are closed up tight

Even though you are there in the light.

 

The death of an artist leaves the world to mourn.

What if I were one, to you would I stay unknown?

Would you, would you have been my friend?

Would you, would you even have loved me?

 

My pencil drops, I have no life

My dreams were my only light. 

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On February 4th 2008 native07mlj Said :
native07mlj Interesting!
On December 30th 2007 Trouble2009 Said :
Trouble2009 great job . . !!
On August 22nd 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said :
J3w3llC82890 aws0me!! ~*Jewell*~
On August 21st 2007 akrovaz Said :
akrovaz The wording is just so different and unique, it's very amazing. Fantastic!
On June 11th 2007 monkeydee22 Said :
monkeydee22 Stupendous! The feeling is contagious! I love it! wow.... well keep it up ~Vampyr~
On June 11th 2007 individulsong Said :
individulsong this is nice! i like it a lot.
On June 11th 2007 ghostfire13 Said :
ghostfire13 i love the ending.
On June 11th 2007 sweety959 Said :
sweety959 nice job! greatly writen! i love it
On June 11th 2007 norrisac Said :
norrisac Yeah i dream the same things every night, lol no really its wonderful i loved it keep up the good work.
On June 11th 2007 angelalone Said :
angelalone awesome.thumbs up.
On June 11th 2007 rokmisox26 Said :
rokmisox26 great work:)
On June 11th 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane nice job!
On June 11th 2007 Pooh455 Said :
Pooh455 aweee. i loved it. nice job. 2 thumbs up.