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A mirror of my mind...

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Behind the Mirror

Views (2233) Lyric Created on 6-10-07 Flag
I am like two great doors, straight and perfect and clear,
That hide another world, hidden from human pain.
Hopes and fears do I show, yet why am I so dear?
Your dreams lie beyond me, endless like pouring rain.

Please will you look at me, see that Vermeer painting?
Your eyes are like hers, the girl with a pearl earring.
I see endless battles, a knight called King Arthur,
But why do you not see, is it merely a blur?

Why do you look away, when fearless beyond me?
The truth do I show you, do you wish to be free?
I have see you grown up, see changes in your lines,
Now I see you sad, longing for the past times.

Open my doors and see, every wonder is here,
It is but a voyage, a route all must take,
You'll find an endless world, your own Castle of Llyr,
I will make you happy, for nothing here is fake.
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On May 29th 2008 Mogami Said :
Mogami This would make a good song n_n
On April 7th 2008 Liz912 Said :
Liz912 culd my band sing it?
On January 6th 2008 skitzoangel Said :
skitzoangel thats good really good~_~
On November 23rd 2007 InvisibleFlame Said :
InvisibleFlame oh I like!
On November 17th 2007 Seniorsgirl07 Said :
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WHEN U R READING THIS DONT STOP OR SOMETHING BAD WILL HAPPEN MY NAME IS SUMMER I AM 15 YEARS OLD i have BLONDE HAIR , SCARS no NOSE OR EARS I AM DEAD IF U DONT COPY THIS JUS LIKE FROM THE RING COPY N POST THIS ON 5 MORE SITES OR I WILL APPEAR ONE CREEPY NIGHT WEN UR NOT ExPECTING IT BY YOUR BED WITH A NIFE AND KILL U THIS IS NO JOKE SUMMET ING GOOD WILL HAPPEN TO U IF YOU POST THIS ON 5 MORE FLASH BOXES
On September 29th 2007 kirstym8 Said :
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this is brilliant, I think you may have inspired me!
On September 29th 2007 kirstym8 Said :
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this is brilliant, I think you may have inspired me!
On September 29th 2007 kirstym8 Said :
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this is brilliant, I think you may have inspired me!
On August 22nd 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said :
J3w3llC82890 w0w. great job! ~*Jewell*~
On August 21st 2007 akrovaz Said :
akrovaz I love this! it's very creatvive!
On August 10th 2007 C00k1i3 Said :
C00k1i3 Awesome
On August 4th 2007 rain2teardrops Said :
rain2teardrops Loved alot!!!
On July 24th 2007 xxrairigh319xx Said :
xxrairigh319xx o i love it..so creative...
On July 19th 2007 ThePieQueen Said :
ThePieQueen Interesting...
On July 10th 2007 iheartmyrp Said :
iheartmyrp WOW.
On June 15th 2007 monkeydee22 Said :
monkeydee22 How come you get all the attention! lol It's easy to tell why... good job i enjoyed it! ~Vampyr~
On June 15th 2007 pinkstar5 Said :
pinkstar5 wow very emotional but i like it! :)
On June 12th 2007 courtloveselle Said :
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souds like u have issues but its a good poem
On June 12th 2007 individulsong Said :
individulsong whoa.... no one yours was always ahead of mine. ;) i love this. so emotional.
On June 12th 2007 anime20 Said :
anime20 Wow...i love it.
On June 10th 2007 Pooh455 Said :
Pooh455 i love it so much. read mine? :] lol
On June 10th 2007 NaomiElizabeth Said :
NaomiElizabeth Yet another good poem keep it up! =^^=
On June 10th 2007 sweety959 Said :
sweety959 wow. this one is good as well. loved it! keep it up!
On June 10th 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I like this one, too. It is full of honest emotions
On June 10th 2007 MythriS Said :
MythriS thats really cool...i like it.