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Not This Time
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Created on 8-27-07
Don’t know what to say
Don’t know what to do
And when I look away I see you
See you holding her hand
See you striding away
Like it was all a game.
I don’t know why
But I want to hit you
I don’t know why
But it feels so right
You hurt me bad and ran away
Now your smile is wide yet I know your plan
Keep away from her, she’s not a victim
Keep away from her, she doesn’t deserve this
Why do you always screw it up ?
Why do you always fail
To realize girls fall for you
Rip their souls out into the night ?
Does this feel right to you ?
I can see you laugh
Does this seem right to you ?
Nothing ever gets through.
Yet I won’t back up
Not this time
You’re not gonna make her cry
Not this time
We won’t be the victims
Not this time
You will.
Earindle
Copyright ©2007 Earindle
Please Login to post comments| On September 1st 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
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great poem, very intense. |
| On August 30th 2007 NaomiElizabeth Said : | |
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I really love this! Nice work. |
| On August 30th 2007 Pooh455 Said : | |
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i loved this. i wish i was that good. |
| On August 29th 2007 rain2teardrops Said : | |
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I really enjoyed this poem!!!! Can't wait for more. You're really good:) |
| On August 28th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I like the way you mixed up the rhyme and structure. Loved the poem! |
| On August 28th 2007 angelalone Said : | |
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makes me think of my ex....very bad split.long long story...anyways thumbs up. |
| On August 28th 2007 angelalone Said : | |
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makes me think of my ex....very bad split.long long story...anyways thumbs up. |
| On August 28th 2007 angelalone Said : | |
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makes me think of my ex....very bad split.long long story...anyways thumbs up. |
| On August 27th 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said : | |
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I like it, very strong feelings, well done! |
| On August 27th 2007 monkeydee22 Said : | |
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Amazing. People will relate to this.
~Vampyr~ |
| On August 27th 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said : | |
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beautiful.
omygosh, i almost cried(wierd huh?)
anyway hun, its great iloveit!
~*Jewell*~ |
| On August 27th 2007 akrovaz Said : | |
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Wow, this is brilliant! I love it! |
| On August 27th 2007 punkyemochik Said : | |
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OMG i love this...it reminds me of my ex. |
| On August 27th 2007 blondemoment22 Said : | |
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WOW! This is incredible. |
