earindle

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Thus

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Created on 8-16-07

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I said ‘I love you’ sometime after I met you

But today I know I hadn’t thought it over

Enough to tell you this something out of the blue

‘No’ was your answer it broke my four leaf clover

One I had wished on

Tears became normal while I tried to forget you

Healing my poor heart and thus my four leaf clover

For it was something which brought me closer to you

But today I know I hadn’t thought it over

Enough and we were only friends

I accept though I cry yet I know it was meant

Thus.

Earindle

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On August 23rd 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said :

	I like it!

On August 22nd 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said :

	wow. left me speachless. i almost cryed. (wierd huh?) ~Jewell~

On August 21st 2007 monkeydee22 Said :

	You have a great style. I like how it makes you think yet you know exactly what it's saying.... well keep me posted. ~Vampyr~

On August 21st 2007 AlexINTJ Said :

	This is wonderful. I love how unique it is and your vocabulary. I loved it.

On August 20th 2007 ghostfire13 Said :

	this is like what is happening with me now. really great poem.

On August 19th 2007 sweety959 Said :

	i like this poem... its very good... great job!

On August 17th 2007 blondemoment22 Said :

	sweeeeeeetness. I really like it. All vague and such.

On August 16th 2007 rain2teardrops Said :

	I really like this poem. Its real good. High five:)

On August 16th 2007 sara52595 Said :

	oh thats so sad. i love it. thats awesome!

On August 16th 2007 individulsong Said :

	Sad. I like this. I want to know, how do you copyright your work? I'd love to know so I can do the same!! Great poem, and thanks for commenting some of my stuff!!! =)

On August 16th 2007 earindle Said :

	Hey thanks for commenting my poem 'Thus'. To answer your question, a four leaf clover is something rare. You need quite alot of patience to find it, and once you've done so, if you take it away from its nourishing soil, you have to put it in water for it to live a while longer. You also wish on a four leaf clover. You hope that something will happen, yet it's quite superficial, isn't it ? So the four leaf clover is actually the metaphore of hopes and dreams, because when something bad happens you feel as if they've gone away, and you need love (water) to make them real again. I hope this makes sense. :)

On August 16th 2007 mcihellejane Said :

	I like this one..I think you wrote it very well. It kinda leaves me wondering 'bout your clover...I know it makes perfect sense to you, but to the reader is might seem a little unclear. If I'm understanding correctly, it's the wish, the hope that is broken (along w/ your feelings/heart)? Is it simply a metaphor? I did really like the poem-this is just my own curiousity so please don't think I'm criticizing...

On August 16th 2007 Savedbyalamb Said :

	Wow, I love it!

On August 16th 2007 akrovaz Said :

	I really like it! Fantastic Work!!

On August 16th 2007 angelalone Said :

	i like it.it's very explanitory...even though it doesn't give details...yeah, that doesn't make any sense...w/e i like it thumbs up.