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Something to hope in.

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 Something to hope in.

Everything that i had hope in.
Everything that i love.
My dreams.
My wishes.
Everything that had kept me smiling has just slipped through my fingers.
I tried with all my might to hold on to everything i trusted in.
But now it has vanished.
I am not lying when i say i tried my hardest.
Can't you see that you have made this happen.
I am not one to blame.
But it really is your fault.
Who was the one who discouraged me?
You.
And critisized me?
Still you.
And even though this is happening, i will still search.
For something to hope in.
I will not give up on this.
And you can't make me either.

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On July 23rd 2007 angeleyes62580 Said :
angeleyes62580 very very good!
On July 23rd 2007 jarnotti Said :
jarnotti really good keep it up
On July 23rd 2007 poet77 Said :
poet77 awesome! hope will be found, even if it's not there all the time, trust me.
On July 23rd 2007 blutess Said :
blutess this was very good. i love ur style. and ur attitude n which u write ur poems.
On July 23rd 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg I can see a ray of hope....awesome poem. I love the strength that you have found and the fight you have in you. I am glad that I am not reading anymore suicide poems....he has taken your hope, your love, your trust....do not let him have the most precious thing....your life.
On July 23rd 2007 Javellef Said :
Javellef Powerful poem. I like it because, although you admit that your hopes we taken away that you will continue to try to find hope.
On July 23rd 2007 lisajoann88 Said :
lisajoann88 well done, another awesome one!
On July 23rd 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 Strong Words! Excellent poem; Keep on writing!