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Mental Suicide |
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Echo's of desperation |
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Now and Forever More |
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Do not break me. |
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A trap. |
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Re-occuring voices. |
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Is there anyone out there? |
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Everyone else. |
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Burn marks |
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I have lost again. |
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My own person |
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A constant reminder |
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I do not dare. |
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MY SUICIDE!!!!!!!!! |
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Just For Today. |
Take off that mask.
Take off the mask.
I can see right through you.
You are my dad and yet you torture my soul.
You take joy in seeing tears stream down my face yet once again.
But when people come around you change into someone i have never met before.
You put your arm around me and i take one step away from you.
You smile at me and i smirk with confusion.
I really do not understand how someone of your age can be so fake.
You would think that you would be wise.
No i guess not.
You are fake when people come around.
But everyone can see how unreal you really are.
So just take off that damn mask!!!!!!
| On July 23rd 2007 poet77 Said : | |
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i totally get this, my parents were like that for a while :( remember I'm here for you |
| On July 23rd 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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LMAO....you are smart beyond your years. So I have something to remember the next time he treats you like dirt. People who have low self-esteem make other people around them feel like dirt....it makes them feel better about themselves. So stand tall, stand proud and do not give him the satisfaction of one single tear. I know it hurts, but you can save your emotions for later when you are alone...when he can't gloat by the way he makes you cry. It is time for you to learn how to put a mask on when you are standing there taking the abuse. I love your poem and I really wish we lived close...we would become friends and go and have a girl day together. |
| On July 23rd 2007 lisajoann88 Said : | |
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really good, i can relate, my mum is the exact same! |


