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A constant reminder
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Created on 7-19-07
A constant reminder.
I try to be strong.
And i try to forget the pain.
I try to dissmiss all of the tears apprehension and worry.
And i try to do my best.
But there he is.
My dad.
A constant reminder.
You're never going to be that girl you want to.
You never measure up
You are not as pretty as your sister.
You are not even pretty at all.
Words that remain unsaid yet i can still read my dad's mind.
He says everything with that face of his.
A stern serious look.
When my sister comes home it changes:
Into a smile.
He changes.
Into a stranger.
Please Login to post comments| On July 22nd 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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A stranger....oh wow, how sad. I really feel for you! Great job on your writings. |
| On July 20th 2007 Javellef Said : | |
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There is a sadness in this poem, that tugs at the heart. The emotional content of this poem makes it very good. |
| On July 19th 2007 numbbbb0z Said : | |
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This is just too good for words..I, honestly. Bravo! :D - I like the last 4 lines. This is very good :D I like it :) |
