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Mental Suicide |
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Echo's of desperation |
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Now and Forever More |
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Do not break me. |
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A trap. |
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Re-occuring voices. |
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Is there anyone out there? |
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Everyone else. |
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Burn marks |
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I have lost again. |
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My own person |
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A constant reminder |
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I do not dare. |
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MY SUICIDE!!!!!!!!! |
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Just For Today. |
My own person
My own person.
I am not just some mindless robot.
I have my own heart.
My own mind.
You can not give me absurd orders and expect me not to know that they are for the good of you.
I hate you and everything you stand for.
Harsh or not that is how i feel.
You try and tak me away from my mom.
So that i can not be happy.
You think you can get up in my face and make me cry over and over yet again?
Wrong.
I now understand.
Your point in life in trying to make my life hell.
You live to make me and my mom miserable.
You degrate other people just to make yourself feel better.
Fuck you.
| On July 22nd 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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There you go....you are learning..take control of your feelings. Awesome show of strength. I love it. |
| On July 20th 2007 DorkyBoo08 Said : | |
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Wow powerful emotions. is this bout your father? im not meant to hurt ur feelings but im curious. |
| On July 20th 2007 Javellef Said : | |
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Wow! The emotions you express in this poem are powerful. |
| On July 19th 2007 jarnotti Said : | |
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wow AWESOME lol. i love this good job |
| On July 18th 2007 numbbbb0z Said : | |
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FUCK YEAH! I love this! :D All the anger - the rebellion - the standing up for yourself. I love it :D Great job :) |


