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Kinda short though,,,,,Rate this Poem
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I have lost again.
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Created on 7-18-07
I have lost again.
I see the dead.
I see war.
I see blood.
A war within myself.
I can not win.
I say "fight with all you've got."
I say "Just give up."
No-one is here to help you win.
No-one is going to heal your wounds and hold you like a friend would.
So just lie there.
Just die.
You deserve it.
I have lost.
Again.
Please Login to post comments| On July 22nd 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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YOU WILL WIN THE WAR WITH YOURSELF. This goes to numbbbboz, I will pay to watch you do that...lol. |
| On July 18th 2007 numbbbb0z Said : | |
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I feel like slapping you, inlovewithc17. |
| On July 18th 2007 inlovewithc17 Said : | |
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idk how to explain it but.....your poem is ok but it needs more feeling in it and needs to be more powerful i like how you write what you feel thats allways good but just work on it it will get better!!!! |
