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Everyone else.
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Created on 7-18-07
Everyone else.
Everyone else has found love.
Not in a relationship.
But that of which within a family.
My dad degrades me.
My mom is there for me but she is weak from my dad's harsh words.
My sister hates me.
My relationship with God has faded.
Everyone else has love.
Everyone else is living.
I might as well be dead!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I try to be as loveable as i can.
I guess that did not work.
I sit here.
On my bed.
Crying my heart out.
Wondering what everyone else's problem is with me.
I hate everyone.
NO, i hate myself more.
I hate waiting for something that seems like eternity.
I hate being trapped.
I hate myself.
READ THE POEM MENTAL SUICDE please.
(IF YOU HAVEN'T ALREADY.)
Please Login to post comments| On July 23rd 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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You sound a lot like me even down to the family situation. All I can tell ya is that things really do get better. My parents...my family has torn me to shreds to the point i've done and thought similar things. You really just have to keep hope and strength for all you hold dear! |
| On July 22nd 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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I have to say that I have talked to you for only a few minutes and you seem to be one of the sweetest girls....your poems sadden me to think that you have been downsized by the ones that are supposed to be your support system and the ones that are supposed to teach you how to love. Love yourself and know that you have done your best to make things right with your family. Good things come to those with good hearts. Focus on your writings and take your emotions out in words. You have a talent that you fail to see...stay strong, ride out the storm and wait for the sun to shine. |
| On July 18th 2007 numbbbb0z Said : | |
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*From a family, also. |
| On July 18th 2007 numbbbb0z Said : | |
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I too do not have the love for a family. Trust me, when I say you are not the only one. For some reason there's something beautiful about human pain. Human anger. A way we are naturally - and it's great that I think you have found a way to tap into that creativity. Strong and passionate. Lieks. |
