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Re-occuring voices.

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Re-occuring voices.


I glance over at the silver blade.
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First voice:
"This could all end RIGHT now"
"Just do it"
"COME ON DO IT!!!!!! YOU ARE SUCH A COWARD"

Second voice:
"No! Don't!"
"Think about your mom."
"Don't do this."

First voice:
"You deserve to die!"
"You need to be held you fucking childish bitch. How pathetic is that?
So pathetic!!!!!!!"
"You need to die. Now!!!."
"JUST DO IT NOW AND GET IT OVER WITH!!"
"Why are you still here no-one is here to stop you." 
"It's either this or you could drown yourself,  it's a lot less
messier but it has the same ending result."
""Besides, you have to wait a year (which seems like eternity anways)
to see your mom."
"So why not end the pain now?"
"Why are you still alive?"
"Your fat."
"Your ugly."
"And you have no talent"
"Everyone hates you."
"You require to be held and that is so stupid."
"Here is your chance to punish yourself for all of it."

Second voice:
"It hurts now, but think about how much pain it would cause your
mom!!"
"Don't do this."
"Believe it or not: you do have people that care about you."


It's like i can hear God and the devil arguing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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On July 23rd 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 Very true as I have too heard these arguing voices. Great poem! One thing ya need to kep in mind is that no matter how dark something seems there is always something and someone out there who cares and loves ya. Listen to God and pray as the devil can't beat you as long as you stay strong.
On July 23rd 2007 Foxi141 Said :
Foxi141 the girl this is really good. *holds out hand* now take my hand and let me help you walk through this world
On July 22nd 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg Listen to your heart and believe in yourself..life seems very bleak at times but you have to believe me when I say this.....you will find your happiness.
On July 18th 2007 sexybeast6879 Said :
sexybeast6879 i lvoed it and yes please listen to the second Voice lol GREAT poem
On July 18th 2007 numbbbb0z Said :
numbbbb0z Listen to the second voice! Please please listen to the second voice =( It's a great poem. The human emotion is just..just..great. But please listen to the second voice =( For me? For cute wittle kitty? You don't wanna make this cute wittle kitty cry, do yew? :'( <3
On July 18th 2007 Aleera00 Said :
Aleera00 Well, It's not really a poem. But it's still good.
On July 17th 2007 dyingfminside Said :
dyingfminside please tell me what you think..