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I would i could...Rate this Poem
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Mental Suicide |
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Echo's of desperation |
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Now and Forever More |
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Do not break me. |
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A trap. |
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Re-occuring voices. |
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Is there anyone out there? |
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Everyone else. |
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Burn marks |
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I have lost again. |
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My own person |
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A constant reminder |
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I do not dare. |
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MY SUICIDE!!!!!!!!! |
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Just For Today. |
A trap.
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Created on 7-16-07
A trap.
I wish i could create a world.
A place that i can be with the ones that i love.
A place away from those who hate me.
A place in which i would have no suicide thoughts.
More or less of a dream world.
I cry myself so hard so i can drift off into that world.
I am accepted.
There is no pain.
And the memories of which that have haunted me fade.
I would have talent.
I would be loved.
I wouldn't have to worry about my dad hurting me.
A broken heart that would be healed in a semi-second.
Invisable tears would be gone.
Pain dies away and dissapears.
Hope would be renewed.
Trust found.
Strength regained.
I am finally free.
And then i wake up.
Eyes once again red.
Pain consumes me once more.
My broken heart is within.
My tears flowing down my face.
My silent screams: useless and powerless.
I realize i do not have any talent.
I am hated.
And unwanted again.
I am reticuled and punished.
I am beaten down when i am already weak.
I see the faces of anguish that i hid from.
The dark and hate filled world is where i find myself.
And i realize now what the dream world was.
A trap.
Please Login to post comments| On July 23rd 2007 Foxi141 Said : | |
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*tears* you are a really good poet. i wish that i could just take you away from this world and take you to a better* |
| On July 22nd 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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OMG...you seem like one of the nicest girls that I have met. This poem truly saddens my heart. You are very talented and I hope you will realize that really soon. Shame on the ones that hurt you, stay strong and know that I will be here anytime you feel you need a friend. Amazing emotion, amazing poem. |
| On July 20th 2007 angeleyes62580 Said : | |
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Really wow this is your best that I have read so far. |
| On July 18th 2007 numbbbb0z Said : | |
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....You will get out of this. Soon you WILL make your dream world a reality, and it won't be a trap. Please trust me. Give life a chance! You will get out of this. <3333 |
| On July 18th 2007 randomsammi Said : | |
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wow thats really good |
| On July 17th 2007 jarnotti Said : | |
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wow i really like this one |
