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This moment in time

Views (90) Anger Created on 7-24-07 Flag

This moment in time.

The words that i am trying to say, just always seem to fade away.
And when you yell and scream and shout.
I have no choice but to let it all come out.
And when the tears start streaming down my face.
I just wish, for once that i could replace:
This moment in time.
And if you don't mind.
I think i'll just stay here.
Never going anywhere near:
You.
I am ever so sorry that love for my own father will never be renewed.
You always say i am the one to blame.
But it is always the fucking same.
I try to apologize.
But i always seem to jeprodize:
My heart and soul.
I never knew this would take such a tole.
As this.
This feeling is sure to be never missed.

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On August 14th 2007 IvyMarie693 Said :
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It seems that you have a lot of repressed emotions towards your father. Maybe you should talk to him about fellow classmates, your life, how you see things play out at home, etc. But in the end... who would want to kill their emotional creativity on a conversation, right? Good job.
On July 28th 2007 Javellef Said :
Javellef Pain is difficult when you are going through it. Poetry is great when you connect with the pain and can put it into words. The words are healing when the pain is released through poetry. Keep healing the pain through your poetry. Great job!
On July 27th 2007 Hollehmariee Said :
Hollehmariee I can relate, well done on the poem.
On July 27th 2007 DorkyBoo08 Said :
DorkyBoo08 aww i do understand. very good.
On July 26th 2007 TaUroNui Said :
TaUroNui cool XD
On July 24th 2007 Tammy676869 Said :
Tammy676869 I THINK U HAVE ALOT OF TALENT THE BEST POEMS AND SONGS ALWAYS COME FROM TRUE DEEP EMOTIONS THOUGH I AM SORRY FOR THE WAY U FEEL I CAN SEE IT IS HELPING YOUR CREATIVITY GREATLY I GIVE U PROPS!!
On July 24th 2007 Foreverlyn Said :
Foreverlyn Never doubt your creative talents, we have our ups and downs, the notes the writings that simply don't seem to have the ALL, but always express yourself.
On July 24th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 see even I make errors like describes on the last comment should be described lol:)
On July 24th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 It doesn't suck, I totally understand. If there's one thing tole is toll, but other than that very good. I think you describes the feelings in this moment of time quite perfectly.