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Requem of One's Death from Fright. |
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The Great Masterbater |
The Great Masterbater
I sit in front of him My hands upon my knees.
I dare not to look at him.
For fear of having sympathy
In the presence of the Great Masterbater
The final confrontation.
and so I began.......
"You lurd them into the bedroom
Wanting to play a game.
You sought out the innocence
Snuffed it like a flame
You tell them you will kill them
If they point to you for blame
Tell them it's a secret
and not to be ashamed.
What you do behind those doors are not for those to see
preying on the little ones is your sick fantasy
You may think your on top of things but I know that your not
They are catching up to you. They have not forgot."
I point my finger at you and hide my face in shame
"No one is here to save you now No one to name."
"Do you see them?"
"I see them."
"They are getting closer now Can you hear the cry's?"
"They are getting closer now. Coming for your demise."
Just then I felt the presence of a thousand troubled souls.
Just then I saw the pitiful that suffered, time and time again.
At the crimson hands
Of the Great Masterbater.
"you promised to tell NO ONE!".....he lashes out.
"You bastard I killed you! I killed!"....He started to shout.
But was silenced by the visions of what appeared to be
1000 troubled souls Coming for their victory.
A firestorm of fury, was suddenly brought about.
Spinning like a tornado All hell boke out.
Raging a war above me
Lasting only a moment in eternity
Then there was silence. Like a storm that came to pass.
The great Masterbater was now nothing, No one At last.
| On February 23rd 2008 ReneakaKC Said : | |
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Aww!!! WOW!!! this is amazing!!! it's just breathtaking!!! GREAT JOB!!! U ROCK!!! |
| On November 4th 2007 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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this is really good! |
| On November 3rd 2007 AMC500 Said : | |
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cool poem bro, great concept |
| On October 24th 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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this is really good, great poem! |
| On October 16th 2007 Vestque Said : | |
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I like it alot. The title initially made me laugh though, LOL. Sorrie, I still like it though ^_^ |
| On October 14th 2007 ESCAPEDFROMGOD Said : | |
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The timing is a little off, but most of it works well. You've got poetic thinking, just with the timing I found a couple of verses had to be forced, but other than that it's easy reading. |
| On October 13th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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I liked it. Nice name for it |
| On October 12th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said : | |
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great poem, i like it |


