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For my little bro

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Created: 05/17 2007
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Category: Worry

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A Little Brothers Song

He is not much smaller or younger than the other,
but still looks up and depends on the other for building
assistance.
He tries to impress and build himself
to be the best expecting more stones to be added,
but the other looks down
and instead removes the stones the brother needed for some
much needed support.
And as the brother stumbles and falls
the other tries to amend by taking out some of his own stones
and giving them to the brother.
But it's too late...the damage is irreparable.
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On November 29th 2008 max5892 Said: 
max5892 good job...
On June 24th 2008 dtsheep Said: 
dtsheep thanks
On April 16th 2008 kaikaoru Said: 
kaikaoru sounds a bit depressively serious, but really good.