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yea, so I ryhme and rythem unorthadox

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Created: 11/18 2008
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Category: Love

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Attetion To Life

My life has been one to be upside-down

Out of control I've fallen onto the ground

Spinning, whirling, just past perfection

I never know in which direction

I'm headed for new life stuck in suspension

Bringing to the ballgame a new found attention

A drive to right that plays a pivtal point

To change things for the good I join

What is left of my sprit, body, and will

To finish what this life started, not stand still

I'm going to make it, I will, no doubt

All the fight and stress will be forgotten about

After all I have done, been tried and true

I make the stanceabout life that is truth

That life isn't just about me, but also you

I'll forever know where my heart feels strife

And that will forever be my attention to life.

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On January 18th 2009 FireAngel420 Said: 
FireAngel420 that was sweet and very well written great job
On November 29th 2008 max5892 Said: 
max5892 i love your rhymes lol. good poem
On November 21st 2008 morbidangel585 Said: 
morbidangel585 it really pulls you in. and its interesting, i like it =]
On November 20th 2008 speederspider Said: 
speederspider a few grammatical errors, but the message is pretty effen awesome:)