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yea, so I ryhme and rythem unorthadoxRate this Poem
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Created:
11/18 2008
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153
Category:
Love
My Poems
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Suicide |
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Face On the Wall |
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Amending |
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Out Alive |
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Unrefined Love |
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Attetion To Life |
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Falling For the Wrong Ones |
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Happy New Year |
Attetion To Life
My life has been one to be upside-down
Out of control I've fallen onto the ground
Spinning, whirling, just past perfection
I never know in which direction
I'm headed for new life stuck in suspension
Bringing to the ballgame a new found attention
A drive to right that plays a pivtal point
To change things for the good I join
What is left of my sprit, body, and will
To finish what this life started, not stand still
I'm going to make it, I will, no doubt
All the fight and stress will be forgotten about
After all I have done, been tried and true
I make the stanceabout life that is truth
That life isn't just about me, but also you
I'll forever know where my heart feels strife
And that will forever be my attention to life.
| On January 18th 2009 FireAngel420 Said: |
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| that was sweet and very well written great job |
| On November 29th 2008 max5892 Said: |
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| i love your rhymes lol. good poem |
| On November 21st 2008 morbidangel585 Said: |
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| it really pulls you in. and its interesting, i like it =] |
| On November 20th 2008 speederspider Said: |
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| a few grammatical errors, but the message is pretty effen awesome:) |


