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The love that will never be...

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Created: 07/01 2008
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Category: Love

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Unrefined Love

It started out talken as friends A simple joke, advice. Just click 'Send' Never thought I'd care so much And it drives me so crazy to think we'll never touch The hardest part of knowing my friend Is being there for her right through the end I'd jump through fire, traffic, to save my God-sent And you sit there laughin, maybe rollin' aside Because the simple truth is i've never laid eyes On the girl i've cared for so much about And even now i wouldn't Know What I'd do without Day one, you opened your mind Your heart and soul had proven your kind Advice, understood me as the person i am We share the same woes given to us, and I think i know you almost more than you Cuz the same can be said for me too You're the first i've ever been 100 percent In everything i've said, i'm honest I can't hide nothing from you, and if i do I can't stand it, cuz its like i betrayed you You're my best friend and a desired dream Whether i want love or walrus milking You've not always been there when i'd like But been there just in time to save my life And each time i thank God above Cuz you will always be, my unrefined love.
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On November 29th 2008 max5892 Said: 
max5892 despite the layout problem, its amazing. really sweet and i can really feel the emotion behind it. awsome job man.
On November 1st 2008 sakat38 Said: 
sakat38 so sweet....
On October 27th 2008 speederspider Said: 
speederspider awwwwe...I know that feelin.
On October 26th 2008 dtsheep Said: 
dtsheep sorry about the layout, lol. the cut and paste import wasn't very untaxing to the format.
On October 26th 2008 ausjo Said: 
ausjo Aww this is really sweet. Was a bit hard to read coz of the layout though.
On October 26th 2008 JenMoe Said: 
JenMoe Ok, wow.... Emotion galore! I love this. I've felt this way myself, and its the most unnerving feeling, especially when you haven't seen and CAN'T see the other person in real life... It sucks. But you did very good with capturing emotion and putting it in here.