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A Little Brothers Song |
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Suicide |
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Amending |
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Out Alive |
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Unrefined Love |
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Attetion To Life |
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Amending
The story can be told just looking into your eyes
The pain you caused us goes way beyond your lies
Your incompetance proved nothing less than fotter
To fuel my call out of your in ability to father
Three kids that lost respect for you while young
You're almost 60 and you get a call from only one
And that's just to check on your well being once in a while
Because i still haven't decided what i'm saying after we file
Out of the building with your ashes incased in its urn
And I have yet to pray for what I am most concerned
That you go to the heavens to escape the pits of hell
But don't worry there are places reserved for Souriles
Becasue we believe in God but can't believe "his truth"
And we tend to stray anyway no matter what we do
But what you've done goes beyond "His forgiveness"
And i hate you more than all those that witness
You in your most vile of moments
Even grotesque in ways and don't it
Feel as if everyone out there is watching
When you do wrong or something
No one praises your good because
They come too late - where i picked it up
I want to ask where the fuck were you
When i needed someone to hold on to
Where were you when i didn't know what next
You tried to teach me but your timing at best
Was horrible because they were all after
We fought never ever after any laughter
I don't hate you but you do need to know
That i will never be your son but when you go
I will probably have the first word or so
And know i will focus on the good not the bad
All 3 minutes worth, i know, its sad
But i can't think of much to say
But hell, that day may be far away
Maybe someday we'll amend
Here's hoping for mircles for men!
| On March 2nd 2009 JewOfWonders Said: |
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| Very emotional, but not Emo |
| On January 18th 2009 FireAngel420 Said: |
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| you can really feel the pain in your words and I can understand that anger all too well |
| On October 26th 2008 JenMoe Said: |
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| Oh wow.... THIS one.... this one holds such emotion. I like this one alot..
Its like you poured yourself into this. The words, and the emotions... and the feeling of this poem.... Its very well done. |


