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Its not conventional - deal with it

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Created: 12/21 2007
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Category: Anger

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I know how you feel when life kills you inside
Every morning we wake up with just a bit less pride
To seize a moment that makes our life worth living
You know you deserve more for how much your giving
And it pains me, it does, to hear you wish to die
Becuase if that were to happen, you know I'd cry
You believe sometimes your care makes no difference
And that everyone hates you and in and instance
The ones you love most may betray you
Turn there backs, stab you, maybe spit on you
I know how you feel when people kill you inside
They stay with you for as long as they can ride
Take advantage of all you have to be giving
They're the ones that make life not worth living
I know you deserve more and i thank you for giving
Me someone i know i would take the place and die
Cuz the world wouldn't miss me, for you it'd cry
So whenever you feel your life makes no difference
You changed and even saved mine in an instance
For as long as we live, i'll cheerish our time
Even if it'll be nothing more, as friends your, mine

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On October 27th 2008 speederspider Said: 
speederspider awwwe that's so sweet.
On October 26th 2008 dtsheep Said: 
dtsheep lol. this is one of the rare ones i tried to hold the scheme together.
On October 26th 2008 JenMoe Said: 
JenMoe Now THIS one.......... Fantastic. Seriously. There were only a couple hitches in it where the rhyming scheme didn't coincide with the rest of the poem, but all in all, it was very well done. I enjoyed this the most, I think..