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Here in My HEART

Views (204) Passion Created on 3-25-08 Flag



A fake smile, I smile

As I tell you goodbye

Waiting till the door shuts

Before I begin to cry

 

Not wanting you to leave

But knowing that you must

With tears streaming down

I’m sure I’ll never adjust

 

Walking around the house

All alone, every night

Peering out the curtains

At the stars shining bright

 

Waiting for a shooting star

For me to wish upon

Wishing you would stay with me

Every night until dawn

 

No shooting star though

And no wish to come true

Miles away from one another

And I am thinking of you

 

Then it hits me and I realize

We’re not really apart

Because no mater where you are

You are here in my heart



On April 26th 2008 kimmy626 Said :
kimmy626 beautiful!!
On March 27th 2008 betyoucantgess Said :
betyoucantgess radical dude
On March 27th 2008 mackenzie3893 Said :
mackenzie3893 I can surley say I know the feeling. I am such a broken track. Cause all I can say is you are such a amazing writer! Jezz.Kudos X's like 100! Great job once again!
On March 27th 2008 7unicornrings Said :
7unicornrings wow really really good. it made me think of the ppl that have loved ones in the army that have to leave them behind. and btw can u count how many poems u have? lol =P o and r u still writing ur story? cuz i really liked it and would love to read more!
On March 26th 2008 amshaye Said :
amshaye t=ive felt this way many tymz. everytym my dad leaves for iraq i feel this way pretty much.
On March 26th 2008 Autumnr1 Said :
Autumnr1 thats happened to me it sux
On March 26th 2008 shadyishott Said :
shadyishott wow i like no LUV it 8]
On March 26th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x Amazing! I love it!
On March 26th 2008 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 This one is really heartfelt. A feeling many can or have related to at some point in time. Keep on writing, that was one of my favs just for the fact of how it was easily read and the lesson it serves. Excellent work!
On March 26th 2008 Bexi93 Said :
Bexi93 'cry,cry,tears,tears' were's a box of tissues when u need 'em hey. tht was beautiful
On March 26th 2008 bambam21502 Said :
bambam21502 beautiful
On March 25th 2008 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb Beautiful! lovely! It's lovely!!
On March 25th 2008 angeleyes62580 Said :
angeleyes62580 WOW!!!!!! This is so beautiful, great job!!
On March 25th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said :
crazygirl2313 I love it, its really good... I felt some what like that
On March 25th 2008 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 aww awesome job
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