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You Told Me a Lie

Views (278) Pain Created on 11-5-07 Flag

When you told me you loved me

And my love set you free

You told me a lie

 

When you told me you’d always be by my side

And would be with me till the end of time

You told me a lie

 

When you told me you’d never let me be sad

And you’d always be there to make me glad

You told me a lie

 

When you told me you’d protect me forever

And you and I will always be together

You told me a lie

 

When you told me only I could ever give you pleasure

And no one else could ever measure

You told me a lie

 

When you told me I was your best friend

And you and I would never end

You told me a lie

 

When all that I see now is that you lie

And all I seem able to do is cry

 

The pain is so strong

And for the truth I long

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On November 5th 2007 only1Abby Said :
only1Abby it shuld end why did u lie? other than i think it needs more, i love it!
On November 5th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 Excellent poem; the very words sound like those of my own as I know I've felt this before.
On November 5th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 if i have not said so already...get this stuff copyrightted.
On November 5th 2007 cheesyma Said :
cheesyma love it!!i feel exactly this way!!
On November 5th 2007 BiAnIcole Said :
BiAnIcole absolutely love it =] i can totally fell this =] awesome job.
On November 5th 2007 SoulArmor Said :
my picture
great poem and good job