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HELL
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Created on 10-31-07
All alone, in this world I roam
So unseen, in a world so mean
I see darkness and pain, for I can’t find my way
In my own world of pain, suicidal thoughts fill my brain
The thoughts control me and tell me this is how it has to be
Cuts cover my body, for cutting is my hobby
I do it every day, for the pain it takes away
As blood drips, in my own world I slip
No one notices in a world so blind, maybe they will when my body they find
I’m drifting away, for in this cruel world I cannot stay
In a new world I drift, where I’m just like the rest
It’s hell you see, it’s where I’m suppose to be
Please Login to post comments| On February 9th 2008 Darkenedsoul21 Said : | |
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really good!! keep writing! |
| On January 31st 2008 shadyishott Said : | |
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wow i can relate to this as well i do cut to take the pain and sadness away |
| On November 2nd 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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I truely can relate and have felt this way a good man times. Honestly I used to cut, but eventually stopped as I had made a promise to a friend. |
| On October 31st 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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it reminds me of my haiku...i know how u feel. |
