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My 1st poem ever...so take it easy on me

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My Dream of Love

Views (174) Love Created on 10-19-07 Flag

My Dream is coming true.....

The kind of love I’d hoped to find, 
is a pure love that is one of a kind.
A life of love without pain,
one with many years to gain.
My dream of love I seek,
is not bitter love, but sweet.
A love that is filled with serenity,
and will last for an eternity
This love that I’ve looked forward to,
is a love I want to share with you.
You cheer me up when I’m down,
you make a smile from my frown.
Each day with you shines so bright,
you protect me throughout the night.
My dream of love is coming true,
every moment I spend with you
I want to let you know from the start,
you do and will always have my heart.
From now until forever,
it will always be you and me together.

 -Ashley-

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On March 17th 2008 bigbabii Said :
bigbabii Very generic...where is the emotion? Read some of my stuff. In order to write great poetry you have to have pain or a cause.
On December 7th 2007 13sweetcheeks Said :
13sweetcheeks nice, that dream came true to me too...
On December 6th 2007 kimmy626 Said :
kimmy626 nice. i like it.
On November 3rd 2007 akrovaz Said :
akrovaz Great Job!! especially being a first poem!! I can relate, because I've often written poetry with almost the same phrases, and several similar ideas. Nice Work!
On November 2nd 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 What a sweet and thoughtful poem expressing how you feel about this special someone!
On October 27th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 hmmmmm. I liked it overall it's a cool poem. but to be honest it seems a bit generic if you know what i mean. like a hallmark card. dont get me wrong it's not bad at all. it has a nice flow an it's clearly from the heart.